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Old 12-19-2014, 06:28 PM   #2627
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Here's an artificial rhyme
Dylan's lyrics for now are mine

now let's find which rhyme it will be
this time

Mama, take this badge off o' me
it's kinda large as you can see

I can't use it anymore
bought it cheap in a hippie store

It's gettin' dark, too dark to see
they really charged me some kind of fee

If I carry on with this rhyme,
hope not to get charged any fine

I feel I'm knockin' on Heaven's door
it lifts me up from the floor

Knock, knock, knockin' on Heaven's door
tock tock clock above the floor

Knock, knock, knockin' on Heaven's door
tock tock clock ashore

Knock, knock, knockin' on Heaven's door
pluck pluck pluck'n off some more

Knock, knock, knockin' on Heaven's door
yak yak yak and Jack's knock'n on 1st floor

Mama, put my guns in the ground
Papa, look what I have found

I can't shoot them anymore
and I don't want to, that's for sure

That long black cloud is comin' down
now I sit and pout and frown

I feel I'm knockin' on Heaven's door
I steal and am mock'n with another door

Knock, knock, knockin' on Heaven's door
shock shock shock, shock'n me on the floor

Knock, knock, knockin' on Heaven's door
tock tock tock, tock'n clock on 7th floor

Knock, knock, knockin' on Heaven's door
truck truck truck'n on Heaven's floor

Knock, knock, knockin' on Heaven's door
flap flap flap'n wings with no rings

with no chaines and no staines on me shirt
I guess that's what he sings, what I heard
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