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Old 08-17-2012, 02:23 PM   #1
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Laugh at the smile
don't slip don't fall
it's all worthwhile

living the moment of time
playing ghost playing host
for those that need it most

cancel low spirits
always on the go, no limits
keeping up the flow forever minutes

no need to cry, why oh why
singing myself a lullaby
to ease the pain

and then wonder can happen
wonders that aren't any
just actions done by many
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Dancing,and romancing with love of the spirits,remembering the memories of some long ago chantings,a teardrop flows,down my cheek,as I am humbling I am also meek.I look to my right and then to my left,my family beside me,I have no regrets.The smiles on their faces,their love,it embraces,as i dance in the rain,I've forgotten the pain.

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Old 08-17-2012, 11:41 PM   #4
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Wow [email protected]Forgottengermanwoman and @Revy...Great job! Great finish!
What do you think. Should we keep it going?
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When the rain is still light, I take my flight
Making sure to soar before it begins to pour
My aim is to fly above the storm on high


**I am struggling with the last line.........need help.....
spreading my wings ever so wide as long as time still is right.
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I feel many people keeping modifying the main topics and I generally got here seeking helpful data and always find most of these junk response. Certainly not cool







be or not to be, that is not the question
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#Jacktripper007[/URL]1546125]I feel many people keeping modifying the main topics and I generally got here seeking helpful data and always find most of these junk response. Certainly not cool







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onward with the poem folks!...........

Need the helpful data so the junk response don't matta(he he he)
It's just not cool so I need renewal!
So I dance in the rain to reduce that pain
While to be or not to be just keeps plaguing on me!
But I see dancing in the rain has no shame
a burning flame above called sun
doesn't want to make me run
out off the rain into fame

a delusion born out of confusion
transforming any pain and staying the same
as always small ways
heading for the next illusion?

Oh no, just grow
enjoying the rain
and show no pain
I wonder, is that sane?
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