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Crazy Time

Feelings allowed for the time being
Feelings forbidden for more than just those days
A happy day, a happy time but jealousy seems to be a crime

A man who says yes but no to more
A good heart a good soul a good woman a good goal
Everything seems right and wrong in this very sad song

I always make it a happy tune
My little bit of jealousy came too soon
What's wrong wanting to show how I feel

A few moments every now and then, that's the deal
A compromise for a paradise
He doesn't care how I feel

And yet I can't let go of his positive show of love
Which isn't quite the expected way by others
If we just were brothers would it be easier?

But I am a woman and he's a man
He will never commit fully and then?
I am not a female bully - so what is wrong?

Me singing a sad song after a great time
Which ruined my day because he called
Letting me know he isn't fully mine

Because I showed a bit of jealousy
When his and this girl's eyes were their destiny
For a moment in time he felt that I went too far

So he called me up to say how bad this girl must have felt
When I said something out loud - which I felt in my heart
Only yesterday he said he was afraid of losing me

What should I feel - what should I see?
A wonderful day and some more to come
But I don't understand the story - that's no fun.
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