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Old 02-09-2012, 09:30 AM   #1
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My Heart Bleeds

My heart bleeds
I know I wasn't the perfect Mom
I did the best I could

My heart bleeds
Even though you're grown
With children of your own

My heart bleeds
You don't come to me
for advice or for friendship

My heart bleeds
You hold the past
Against me

My heart bleeds
If I moved away
Would you miss me?

My heart bleeds
If I were to die
Would you grieve me?

My heart bleeds
My heart bleeds
My heart bleeds
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Old 02-09-2012, 11:08 AM   #2
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That's beautiful, sad, but beautiful... did you write that yourself?
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Old 02-09-2012, 04:21 PM   #3
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Thank you, and yes I did write it!

To make a long story short, my daughter got upset with me after getting back together with her step-father because he still drinks....she doesn't understand my reasoning! So things just don't seem the same as they used to with her and I....and this poem came to head one day, so I shared it!
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I'm so sorry about the situation.

I know it's none of my business, but, I hope it gets better.

I really liked the poem. I didn't know you could put writings on here musta missed that lol
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It's a beautiful poem, but very sad.
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