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Old 07-22-2007, 11:06 AM   #1
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We live in a world that is moving too fast
And I always wonder how long we will last
As Violence and anger we hear every day
This world we live in will soon pass away
The seeds of Hate have taken their toll
As the world we live in spins out of control
How quickly this life can change around
We have seen so many ups and downs
Like a rotten fruit from a broken vine
This world will decay a healthy mind
I tried so hard to do things right
to see an end or to see the light
This pain that always fills my head
Many times I just wished that I were dead
So what should I believe that this life is for
Sometimes I really do not care any more
To hold on a bit longer and not let go
or just find a reason so I would know
I wish just once, I could have a better day
if I decide to live just a more day
With this pain inside I’ll try to hold on
Because deep inside I might be wrong
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Very true words to todays lives,,,,write more..
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impressive work! Have you had anything published? You should try if you havent.
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my god man that was heartwrenching to read. I was right there in the words letting them just assault my mind. what a dark place to be, and a show of bravery to walk on.
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