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  • "I am looking for this girl"

    To every girl that is SCARED to
    put her heart out there again,
    because she has been HURT
    too many times or so badly.

    To every girl that has been
    cheated on,
    because she's not a slut
    who gives it up to any guy.

    To every girl that
    dresses cute,
    not skanky. <3

    To every girl who
    wants to be called
    beautiful, not hott.

    To every girl that will spend her
    whole day looking
    for the perfect present for you.

    To every girl who gets her heart
    broken, because he
    chose the slut instead.

    To every girl that would die
    to have a decent boyfriend.
    To every girl who would just once
    like to be treated like a princess.

    To every girl that won't get
    down on her knees & open
    her mouth just to get a boyfriend.

    To every girl that
    just wants to hold hands.
    To every girl that
    kisses him with meaning.

    TO EVERY GIRL WHO JUST WISHES
    HE CARED MORE.

    To every girl who would just
    once want a guy to give their
    jacket up when they are cold.

    To every girl who
    just wants him to call.

    To every girl who lies
    awake at night thinking about him.

    To every girl that
    just wants to cuddle.

    To every girl that
    just wants to sleep with
    him without having sex.

    TO EVERY GIRL WHO SHOWS HOW MUCH
    SHE CARES BUT GETS NOTHING BACK.

    To every girl that thought
    "maybe this one could be the one."

    To every girl that laughs at stupid stuff
    when she actually >>doesn't<< think it is funny.

    To every girl who is just
    looking for that one and
    only and is having a rough
    time along the way.

    To every girl that doesn't want
    a guy who just plays with her
    emotions but actually cares about
    how she feels.

    TO EVERY GIRL WHO WANTS WORDS
    BACKED UP WITH ACTIONS.

    TO EVERY girl that FELL for ALL the LIES
    ONLY TO FIND THEMSELVES ALONE in the END.

    To every girl that gave her heart away
    to have it shoved back in her face.

    To every girl that has faith that
    "tomorrow will be a better day."
    And it will be.



    Poem by. Tiffany Red Feather
    OneidaDreamer
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    Last edited by OneidaDreamer; 03-14-2007, 05:31 PM. Reason: new edit
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  • #2
    I like this one! You post alot of great poems, keep em comming!
    I got a fevah! And the only cure is more cowbell!!!

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    • #3
      Wow, that was good.
      Elaine Roy

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      • #4
        I like that poem!!!!

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        • #5
          this is too depressing.....LOL
          sigpic This is how I dance when your standing next to me...

          "Cry 'Havoc' and let slip the Dogs of War..."

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          • #6
            good but depressing.
            sigpic This is how I dance when your standing next to me...

            "Cry 'Havoc' and let slip the Dogs of War..."

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            • #7
              Feed Back

              My poetry isn't all fluffy and puffy and creamy. I've grown out of that years ago.

              I write for me. I write for all people. If people don't like my poetry that is cool too. Or if people dig my poetry; mores the pleasure

              All I ask is for criticism good or ill.


              Miigwech ya'll for all the feedback my friends....
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              Last edited by OneidaDreamer; 01-08-2007, 10:04 PM. Reason: not finished
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              • #8
                Do you keep these in a book or someting? Ive liked all your poems, I was touched by this one it rang so true in many ways im sure alot of ladies can relate. Thank-You for shareing your talent with us...
                I got a fevah! And the only cure is more cowbell!!!

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                • #9
                  Awesome OneidaDreamer

                  very nice thankyou.. From all the girls... hehe

                  ~~~ Never look down on anybody unless you're helping them up. ~~~


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                  • #10
                    My Perception of Women

                    Originally posted by Eagle Plumes
                    Do you keep these in a book or someting? Ive liked all your poems, I was touched by this one it rang so true in many ways im sure alot of ladies can relate. Thank-You for shareing your talent with us...





                    I had a hardback journal 15 years ago; although it has gone on a journey all its own since those early daze. I wrote a poem called "Man Is A Fool". It was an early Feminist piece. I am a FEMINIST. It's how I've always believed.

                    I was told by my Father Melvin James Smith, to Respect Women above all else. To hold them sacred and to treat them like princesses. To never lay hands on a woman. Even if she hits you back. Just walk away from her. To cook meals for her and to make tea if she's feeling sick or on her moon or whatever her temperament at that time. I could go on, but I think you get the point.

                    My Father tried to taught me the right way to treat a woman and a philosophy too.


                    I just really feel for women. I see and feel what happens to them and how they are treated daily and it makes me sad. Women are sacred beings capable of bringing life into this world and raising and caring for their families. They get treated like crap constantly. They are manipulated and used and beaten and drugged and raped by unthinking selfish dishonorable fools.

                    Furthermore women are ignored and treated like sexual objects. What ever happened to snuggling and cuddling? Sex is a sacred and erotic act, not a tool to dominate and belittle women. Why do men call them *****ES and other names? That's just wrong to me. It is the complete antithesis of my beliefs! It really freaks me out and pisses me off to hear of that kind of treatment. Especially if it's one of my own.

                    I don't understand why anyone would treat a woman rudely or disrespectfully. It just doesn't make sense to me at all. Or strike her for that matter!!!


                    So this poem really touched me. I got all misty eyed. For real. Yes I cry lots. When I watch a movie where someone dies or whatever emotional stimulation I get; I cry. My Empathy knows no rival. I'm just me; Lanuhsi slehs or James Melvin Smith...


                    Miigwech
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                    • #11
                      Thank you for sharing that

                      Inuk*



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                      A person who works with their hands & their brain is a craftsman,
                      A person who works with their brain & their heart ... is an Artist".
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                      • #12
                        Whats wrong with sex ?

                        A feminist man doesn't see anything wrong with a strong, sensual, sexual woman ......

                        If a woman wants sex instead of cuddling theres absolutely nothing wrong with that.........

                        If a woman sees sex as something mutualy pleasurable an not something sacred theres absolutely nothing wrong with that either.........

                        How many of yalls ladys would honestly get bored with nothing but "sacred sex" after a while ? lol


                        A feminist man doesn't turn a woman into a princess, an put her up on a pedistal, an wrap her up in bubble wrap to protect her from everything.......

                        He wants a woman to stand beside him as an equal.

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                        • #13
                          dang i really like this one a lot....
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                          • #14
                            But what do I know huh? I&quot;m just a MAN...

                            Originally posted by w30
                            Whats wrong with sex ?

                            A feminist man doesn't see anything wrong with a strong, sensual, sexual woman ......

                            If a woman wants sex instead of cuddling theres absolutely nothing wrong with that.........

                            If a woman sees sex as something mutualy pleasurable an not something sacred theres absolutely nothing wrong with that either.........

                            How many of yalls ladys would honestly get bored with nothing but "sacred sex" after a while ? lol


                            A feminist man doesn't turn a woman into a princess, an put her up on a pedistal, an wrap her up in bubble wrap to protect her from everything.......

                            He wants a woman to stand beside him as an equal.



                            Way to stand by your convictions and ideals! You don't think I'm all for a woman gettin hers too? That's cool you disagree with me or anything I've written. I never said wrap her in bubble wrap did I? Or protect her from EVERYTHING did I? Way to put words in my mouth lady.

                            Sounds to me that you have some things to work out for your self, perhaps you have some issues you need to work on eh? Seems to me our perceptions differ greatly. Or are you begrudging me my perceptions?


                            But what do I know huh? I"m just a MAN...
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                            • #15
                              I like that, its a beautiful poem. Where could I find such a man? It aligns with all my morals and values. Beautiful!

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