The Key is Gone

[Daughter of the Mist]

In a spectral silence came the bird
Glowing red ember it passed me at dusk
Riding wind currents of another time
First cycle then exploded with thus

Venture to a cool clear night
Fleeting sweet silence leads dawn
Four stars create the trapezoid
Israel knows the key is gone

[OneidaDreamer]

In a spectral silence came the bird
Glowing red ember it passed me at dusk
Riding wind currents of another time
First cycle then exploded with thus

Venture to a cool clear night
Fleeting sweet silence leads dawn
Four stars create the trapezoid
Israel knows the key is gone

I was wondering if you wanted to say "with thus" or if it was a typo. I do like the poem. Good imagery.

[Daughter of the Mist]

I was wondering if you wanted to say "with thus" or if it was a typo. I do like the poem. Good imagery.

with thus....mabye context. hmmm. it is referring back to the sighting of the bird as the advent of all events that follow.