Originally posted by OneidaDreamer
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with thus....mabye context. hmmm. it is referring back to the sighting of the bird as the advent of all events that follow. -
Originally posted by Daughter of the Mist View Post
I was wondering if you wanted to say "with thus" or if it was a typo. I do like the poem. Good imagery.Leave a comment:
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The Key is Gone
In a spectral silence came the bird
Glowing red ember it passed me at dusk
Riding wind currents of another time
First cycle then exploded with thus
Venture to a cool clear night
Fleeting sweet silence leads dawn
Four stars create the trapezoid
Israel knows the key is gone
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whispered wind in sullen night...
traveled forth to bear a light
time has settled to reveal
your song and spirit in dream i feel
grace me with attentive eyes
peak of thoughts you mesmerize
quiet words to captivate
few thoughts of silence to contemplat01-07-2008, 12:40 AM -
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Whether it is some lost time to heal<O:P></O:P>
Distance to seek faded destiny<O:P></O:P>
Moments lost let 'em off scot-free<O:P></O:P>
<O:P></O...01-07-2008, 12:36 AM -
whispered wind in sullen night...
traveled forth to bear a light
time has settled to reveal
your song and spirit in dream i feel
grace me with attentive eyes
peak of thoughts you mesmerize
quiet words to captivate
few thoughts of silence to contemplat01-07-2008, 12:26 AM -
...Serious options emerge from the mist
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It's not about a life yet I did resist
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Embedded forces a law of nature
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Yesterday today, a path of vapor
<O:P></O:P>01-07-2008, 12:35 AM -
...Serious options emerge from the mist
<?XML:NAMESPACE PREFIX = O /><O:P></O:P>
It's not about a life yet I did resist
<O:P></O:P>
Embedded forces a law of nature
<O:P></O:P>
Yesterday today, a path of vapor
&l01-07-2008, 12:30 AM
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