for him

[Grits & Beans]

for him


still waters run deep
feeling so good on my feet
i found this body of water as cool as stone
very different from the one i knew at home
the constant crashing, what a display
of stormy weather on a sunshine day
washed over me a thousand impressions
after a tiresome journey to arrive at refreshing
i bathe in this water as cool as clay
sit myself at his shore and read all day
his calm causes me to easily slumber
he provides my food when i hunger
still waters run deep
and when i grow up that's what i want to be

[cris_neva]

Wow...thats nice!

[Joe's Dad]

That cool as stone sounds like me! As if! That's good writing. Is that poetry? I'm not good at writing.

You should start a thread called Gritty's Poetry Corner n write more!

[2lineCarrandMorgan]

wonderful

[NorthofAda]

Very cool!!!

[Grits & Beans]

thanks guys

and jd that's not a bad idea

[BigChef]

Is that JLO???? In ur avatar?

[Grits & Beans]

Is that JLO???? In ur avatar?

your still in the doghouse for calling me fat! the nerve of u!

[BigChef]

That wasn't me. I don't even know what you are talking about.

[BigChef]

An I'm tired of being a dog... I wanna be a wolf now! (But I really wanna be a tiger!!!)

[timmy tiger]

An I'm tired of being a dog... I wanna be a wolf now! (But I really wanna be a tiger!!!)

Hey now wait a minute here.LOL

I'm the tiger on these threads.

[Grits & Beans]

That wasn't me. I don't even know what you are talking about.

We could go out and look for a smaller shower like you've been wanting

[Grits & Beans]

Is that JLO???? In ur avatar?

no it is not jlo! do i look like i have poor taste?

it is the exact same person as in my old avy....

[BigChef]

Sorry, I just remember the jumping in a shower and somehow i corelated that equated a big shower. I didn't know you were gonna call your self a shower! Why would you do that anyhow?

So that's mc lyte then? I would have never guessed.

[China girl ebonyeyes]

I like your writings, you are good. Do you have more? You should put them in a poetry contest and maybe some of them could get publish you never know.