open letter to men (part one-in the third person)

[KewlMohawkGirl]

Your welcome. I will be sure to stay tuned...

[Grits & Beans]

thanks luvduv and kmg

more to come...stay tuned lol

[KewlMohawkGirl]

What a great poem...Nya:weh for sharing!!!

[LuvDuv]

open letter to men

Hi! I liked your writes, very nice.

~ LuvDuv ~

[Joe G]

i missed what you added, i just now noticed it. very nice!

Thanks..it must have had a delayed fuse to it!

[Grits & Beans]

*props to Otis* 'You got to got to got got got got to try try try try a little tenderness' LOL....nobody ever said it better

i missed what you added, i just now noticed it. very nice!

[Grits & Beans]

When the time calls for it, now back to your spot why wouldn't they want it LOL

because provider(man) is not synonymous with caregiver(woman). they are not the same role, like guard is not the same as forward. that is what i meant by spot.

[China girl ebonyeyes]

Hey I appreciate the romance behing the poem, I actually like it.

[Joe G]

Did I mention my fee? j/k

[Grits & Beans]

*props to Otis* 'You got to got to got got got got to try try try try a little tenderness' LOL....nobody ever said it better

thank you! at least somebody gets it!

[Joe G]

OK a little creative editing just for you!!!

open letter to men


dear men, please be lenient
and try to make amends
for every one time she let you down,
you let her down ten.

my brothers, let her teach you about trust
never wonder why she loves you still
there's more to love than lust
just know that she always will.

dear men, your words spoken should be given from the heart
for she brings life in to the world
and you alone can't play that part.

my brothers, it is wiser to be honest and true
deception is the enemy of happiness
don't let it fool you too.

dear men, in conclusion let me say
she chose you for a reason
and if you are ever going to love her, let it be today.

*props to Otis* 'You got to got to got got got got to try try try try a little tenderness' LOL....nobody ever said it better

[Grits & Beans]

When the time calls for it, now back to your spot why wouldn't they want it LOL

why do you think, hmmm?

[lbgood]

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[Grits & Beans]

Yeah - you know how we do

Poe-n-flow

oh i doubt that. real poetry requires an appreciation of romance. are you saying you have expertise when it comes to being romantic, hmmm?

[lbgood]

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