ode to cholesterol

[Grits & Beans]

ode to cholesterol





you know the goop
we call cholesterol
that clogs your arteries
and that sticks to your heart
and that never goes away?
in no way does it affect
my love for you!

[Joe G]

ode to cholesterol





you know the goop
we call cholesterol
that clogs your arteries
and that sticks to your heart
and that never goes away?
in no way does it affect
my love for you!

Don't quit your day job! ^^

[Grits & Beans]

oh, you were expecting some more super mushy talk?

[lbgood]

.

[Joe G]

I think he wanted you to talk all MUSS to him LMAO!!!!!

Not likely. Just didn't think it was one of her better efforts....

[Grits & Beans]

thanks for the critique and for staying on topic joe! wish i could say the same for lb...

[injunboy]

good job

[blueskysmom]

cholesterol

Could have said more; like:

The last line could have read:

You have my utmost assurance
that when we marry, I will up your insurance

[Grits & Beans]

lol @ up your insurance, that's for a different poem- a widows poem

this is about cholesterol lol... not that i want to fried chicken a man to death or anything like that hehe

[lbgood]

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